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I look around..

22 February 2010 3 Comments

I look around..

I look around and realize
that there is soo much talent around me..
I look around and realize
that I hadnt opened my eyes..

I look around and agonize
that I am nothing in front of thee..
I look around and agonize
that I wasted my time unwise..

I look around and recognize
that there is soo much passion in me..
I look around and recognize
that its only a matter of time
before I bring the surprise..

3 Comments »

  • Balaji V said:

    Good one there..
    i might flick it, hope not to get sued… :)

    # 22 February 2010 at 4:40 pm
  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @ Balaji..
    :) Please feel free to.. It was an arbit attempt to write something meaningful when it rhymes…

    # 22 February 2010 at 6:30 pm
  • Ashith Kumar said:

    Short and sweet :) :)

    # 23 February 2010 at 1:55 am

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