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The Rejection

23 February 2010 24 Comments

The Rejection

“I love you Vandana,
Give me a chance!
I want to be your partner
For a life long dance!!”

It took you by surprise,
When I proposed
But you hardly took a second,
My poem got disposed!

“You know me not..
and you love me why!”
I mumbled something..
feeling very shy!!

“Vandana, I seriously like you..
Give me a chance”
You were emotionless and
you took a strong stance

“There is LOVE
and there is LIKE
Dont be stupid
and act like psyche”

You convinced me..I will find an angel,
while you depart!!
Why cant you be my damsel,
My heart fell apart!!

Communications died
My heart cried..
But somewhere I did try
And wont repent when I die!!

What wrong did I do
cringes my heart!!
Vandana, I sincerely love you
But I will respect your thought!

Hope you guys like it.. Like every time I am sure you are going to ask who is Vandana.. Vandana is an imaginary girl.. whose name I use whenever I write about a girl on CWS..

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  • Payal Kamat said:

    Nice poem, but a sad story… I think Vandana took a strong stance coz she was away from emotions, and not because she didn’t like the proposer…… sad!

  • vetti said:

    Last para:
    >What wrong did I do?
    Havent you read your blog post?

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Payal: If i am dreamer.. u r a super dream.. If i have a potential of peotry.. u have the potential of soap operas πŸ˜› Just kidding πŸ˜›

    @Vetti: I guess the girl would have read my blog πŸ˜› Probably… never thought in that direction only.. ha ha ha

  • Sandeep said:

    hmm..It’s hard to believe that Vandana doesn’t exist. If she doesn’t exist, please convey my congratulations to her. Just kidding πŸ˜›

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @PRK.. πŸ˜› What PJ is this..

  • Abhishek said:

    Mr. Sundar Rajan G S, it is quite evident that you do not have anything to do – but great job.

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Abhishek: Thanks a lot πŸ™‚ Although I who did find the EVIDENCE that i dont have anything to do πŸ™‚

  • Abhishek said:

    Looks like you missed some words there – I am assuming you want to know who am I, right?
    Well I was planning to put down my surname when it would have become obvious – but then πŸ™‚

    Hint: Your plush PPO had given you the luxury of all these indulgences while mortals like us have to slog it out πŸ˜€

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Abhishek: I knew that u Mr. Mittal.. coz i am the admin of the site and I get ur email when u leave the comment πŸ˜›

  • E.V.Iyer said:

    Hi,

    Stunning.

    Thanks

  • Ashith Kumar said:

    agar ending teek nahi huwa, toh samjho picture abhi bhi baaki hain mere dost…

    very good poem πŸ™‚ :)…

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Iyer – Thanks πŸ™‚

    @Ashith – That was lovely comment .. πŸ˜›

  • Vatsala said:

    First 3 secs – ada paavi, ivlo dhillaa Sundarku..
    Next 5 secs – Is Sundar actually posting “that” poem..
    At end of post declaration – duh..
    πŸ˜€

    Good poem, good rhyme scheme – entire emotion captured in day to day english

    and the girl’s reaction captured with superb precision.. πŸ™‚

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Vatsala – ha ha…”that” poem πŸ˜›
    And sundar has dhill also.. just that I am not finding any individual other than sachin tendulkar & ht maam to write a poem on.. But if find one.. I am sure that person will be special.. and I will write one for her.. πŸ˜› and will use my *dhill* to use.. for the time being.. i will keep it to some poems πŸ˜›

  • Vandana said:

    Enough. Stop it. Stop torturing everyone because of me.

  • Abhishek said:

    Will it be safe to assume that the above comment is a twist in the tale πŸ™‚

  • Mike said:

    Sundar you catching up fast…..nice poem dude ,don’t take away Mike’s bread and butter and add JAM [:)]

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Vandana: Glad to know that you are alive.. But sorry! you are not the one I addressed the poem..

    @Abhishek: Ha ha.. no ways!

    @Mike: You are the undisputable king..

  • sukanya said:

    hey bro

    good job… keep it up :)….Gotto speak to ur parents soon.. Now that ur way is clear, thr shudnt be much trouble πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

  • Vasanth said:

    Hope it is not Vandhana, the FPM girl πŸ™‚

  • Vandana said:

    Hey, why do you disown me (that too in public !). Sundar, I dint expect this from you. Not going to pick your calls for a week.

  • Vetti said:

    @vandana: Awesome πŸ™‚
    @sundar: What is this, new conpusion?

  • Sundar Rajan G S (author) said:

    @Sukanya: Enna idhu.. Telling parents & all.. chinna pulla thanama irruku πŸ˜›

    @Vasant: No.. Surely Not FPM Girl πŸ™‚

    @Vandana: Good prank! Now reveal your identity

    @Vetti: Dei.. are you playing the prank πŸ™‚