The Rejection
The Rejection
“I love you Vandana,
Give me a chance!
I want to be your partner
For a life long dance!!”It took you by surprise,
When I proposed
But you hardly took a second,
My poem got disposed!“You know me not..
and you love me why!”
I mumbled something..
feeling very shy!!“Vandana, I seriously like you..
Give me a chance”
You were emotionless and
you took a strong stance“There is LOVE
and there is LIKE
Dont be stupid
and act like psyche”You convinced me..I will find an angel,
while you depart!!
Why cant you be my damsel,
My heart fell apart!!Communications died
My heart cried..
But somewhere I did try
And wont repent when I die!!What wrong did I do
cringes my heart!!
Vandana, I sincerely love you
But I will respect your thought!
Hope you guys like it.. Like every time I am sure you are going to ask who is Vandana.. Vandana is an imaginary girl.. whose name I use whenever I write about a girl on CWS..
Nice poem, but a sad story… I think Vandana took a strong stance coz she was away from emotions, and not because she didn’t like the proposer…… sad!
Last para:
>What wrong did I do?
Havent you read your blog post?
@Payal: If i am dreamer.. u r a super dream.. If i have a potential of peotry.. u have the potential of soap operas
Just kidding 
@Vetti: I guess the girl would have read my blog
Probably… never thought in that direction only.. ha ha ha
hmm..It’s hard to believe that Vandana doesn’t exist. If she doesn’t exist, please convey my congratulations to her. Just kidding
@PRK..
What PJ is this..
Mr. Sundar Rajan G S, it is quite evident that you do not have anything to do – but great job.
@Abhishek: Thanks a lot
Although I who did find the EVIDENCE that i dont have anything to do 
Looks like you missed some words there – I am assuming you want to know who am I, right?
Well I was planning to put down my surname when it would have become obvious – but then
Hint: Your plush PPO had given you the luxury of all these indulgences while mortals like us have to slog it out
@Abhishek: I knew that u Mr. Mittal.. coz i am the admin of the site and I get ur email when u leave the comment
Hi,
Stunning.
Thanks
agar ending teek nahi huwa, toh samjho picture abhi bhi baaki hain mere dost…
very good poem
…
@Iyer – Thanks
@Ashith – That was lovely comment ..
First 3 secs – ada paavi, ivlo dhillaa Sundarku..
Next 5 secs – Is Sundar actually posting “that” poem..
At end of post declaration – duh..
Good poem, good rhyme scheme – entire emotion captured in day to day english
and the girl’s reaction captured with superb precision..
@Vatsala – ha ha…”that” poem
and will use my *dhill* to use.. for the time being.. i will keep it to some poems 
And sundar has dhill also.. just that I am not finding any individual other than sachin tendulkar & ht maam to write a poem on.. But if find one.. I am sure that person will be special.. and I will write one for her..
Enough. Stop it. Stop torturing everyone because of me.
Will it be safe to assume that the above comment is a twist in the tale
Sundar you catching up fast…..nice poem dude ,don’t take away Mike’s bread and butter and add JAM [:)]
@Vandana: Glad to know that you are alive.. But sorry! you are not the one I addressed the poem..
@Abhishek: Ha ha.. no ways!
@Mike: You are the undisputable king..
hey bro
good job… keep it up
….Gotto speak to ur parents soon.. Now that ur way is clear, thr shudnt be much trouble 
Hope it is not Vandhana, the FPM girl
Hey, why do you disown me (that too in public !). Sundar, I dint expect this from you. Not going to pick your calls for a week.
@vandana: Awesome
@sundar: What is this, new conpusion?
@Sukanya: Enna idhu.. Telling parents & all.. chinna pulla thanama irruku
@Vasant: No.. Surely Not FPM Girl
@Vandana: Good prank! Now reveal your identity
@Vetti: Dei.. are you playing the prank
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